Reviewer: KC
Date: 28 Nov 2013 2:09 am 
Title: Chapter 2
"Allura then closed her eyes, and tried to accept her fate."

Interesting story. There's always been a sense that this IS Allura's fate. It just could never be shown in the series. Very nicely written. Hope Allura can find happiness with Lotor, just like he said, and possibly change him for the better.

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:59 pm 
Title: Chapter 2
This story was so good, it's a shame it was so short! The bad boy got the girl...it's how real life usually works! I love Lotor's sick sense of humor in this story. Excellent job!

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:46 pm 
Title: Chapter 1
"Don’t worry, if the rest of you get lost, I’m sure Romelle knows the way" I love the Lotor you portray in your story, he is completely evil with a sick sense of humor. This chapter is well written and very interesting. Great job.