Reviewer: Cheezey 
Date: 10 Sep 2008 12:24 pm 
Title: Chapter 1
I like the notion of Lance/Merla as well.  This was an interesting story with a lot of unique ideas in it.  I especially enjoyed the notion of the Drule gods and the volcano and your take on Merla's backstory.  It's rare that I can get past an author killing one of my favorite characters (hangup of mine) without back-buttoning on the spot, but I wanted to see how your story concluded. I got a kick out of the dark twist at the end.