Reviewer: Jason 
Date: 04 Jun 2010 10:52 pm 
Title: Chapter 9: The Last Hope
Wow . . . very surreal twist.

Very interesting story!

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:19 pm 
Title: Chapter 9: The Last Hope
You really got me there...This story was like a Voltron Twilight Zone kind of episode. It was genius, I wouldve never imagined it was just a fantasy. I really enjoyed it, this was a great read indeed! ;0)))

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Actually, one of the things I liked best about the "Twilight Zone" were the surprise twists. That's probably why my serious stories all have a surprise ending.

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:07 pm 
Title: Chapter 8: Inner Strength From the Great Beyond
The fact that Allura is capable of seeking into the good traits of an evil person is very believable. That's what I like most of the Allura you have been portraying in your story. Great job!

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:58 pm 
Title: Chapter 7: Lady of Darkness
I like the idea of making Queen Merla a lesbian...if would've been great if that was a part of the original series. I never liked that in the series Keith would win Lotor easily specially in the sword fighting. I've always thought that Lotor is a better fighter than Keith. (It's just that I don't like Keith that much) This was a great chapter. I liked it very much. ;0)))

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:43 pm 
Title: Chapter 6: The Death of Innocence, and the Sins of Passion
This chapter was so arousing...I loved it! ;0)))

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:28 pm 
Title: Chapter 5: Necessary Evils
Wow, Romelle was pregnant and forced a miscarriage...I never would've thought! Great plotline!

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:18 pm 
Title: Chapter 4: A Kingdom Without Hope
I just couldn't believe that Allura would willingly offer herself to Lotor before a wedding...wow...that is so different. I think she wants Lotor to do her. ;0) I'm really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:00 pm 
Title: Chapter 3: Family Reunions
Oh wow, what an interesting plot..Lotor is winning yay! Just as it should be ;0)))

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 06 Apr 2010 5:47 pm 
Title: Chapter 2: No Mercy for the Innocent
Wow, your Lotor is really evil...I love it! What a great read ;0)))

Reviewer: Lionora 
Date: 06 Apr 2010 5:33 pm 
Title: Chapter 1: Defeat and Humiliation at the Hands of a Child
That was a fast death for Zarkon. I would've expected him to fight longer, but hell: The king is dead; long live the king! Good chapter.

Reviewer: Cheezey 
Date: 10 Sep 2008 1:57 pm 
Title: Chapter 1: Defeat and Humiliation at the Hands of a Child
Hah, nice kicker at the ending there!  And I think Merla would enjoy having Romelle as a slave, heh heh.

Author's Response: Thank you!  You're too kind.  Sorry about Cossack.  I wanted to show just how evil Lotor is.  However, I did think I gave Cossack some of the best lines.

Reviewer: feli3 
Date: 07 Mar 2008 11:24 pm 
Title: Chapter 9: The Last Hope
Truly in awe.. Such great drama and emotion with such a great twist... Hope you continue to write. Thanks for a great story..