Reviewer: catwoman 
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:03 pm 
Title: Part Two
Great! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: catwoman 
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:56 pm 
Title: Part Two
This is an excellent story - I really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: purrsia S
Date: 26 Jun 2006 10:26 am 
Title: Part One
Hey, Cheeze!

I just listened to this fic (those mp3s were handy) and felt I must come here and review it!

I'm not surprised it was good. I've never read anything of yours I didn't like. So this goes pretty much without saying.

So let's get down to some specifics. I thought the story flowed well and - I think it was you that professes to hate writing battle scenes, but that whole first part with the Lions fighting that robeast was awesome.
I loved the part where Lotor had that exchange with Coran and made it clear it *was* a hostile maneuver. So Lotor! :lol:

Your story line here is well thought out and makes sense, and I think you've done a nice job keeping Lotor and Allura in character. I liked the reference to the Berbils (Thundercats Ho!) and in the second part, the canon reference to Keith's little credit stealing omission bwahaha!! In fact, you have a lot of nice canon references. Kudos to you on research and using it to advance your plot.

The second half was interesting - I like the idea of Lotor being held captive and Allura's conflict over what to do about him. Everyone's reactions seemed on par and you're great at painting a vivid picture.
My favorite quote in this part was when Hunk remarked about putting his foot up Lotor's blue ass. Oh...classic!

Anyway, I can't wait to jump into the next part of this series. You've got an intriguing plot with a great set-up. Leaves one to wonder what will happen to Lotor as he's tried by GG for warcrimes, what is going on with Allura and her feelings - not to mention how the others on the team react to it, and what Doom's next move is going to be with Blue Lion out of commission.

In short: Loved it!