Lion Voltron Mary Sue Litmus Test


Wonder if your Original Character in your Voltron Fan Fiction masterpiece is a Mary Sue? Check any and all answers that apply below to find out. In the case that nothing applies to your character in a given group of questions, you must check the 'None of the above applies to my OC' option for the script to work. Count any "maybe”, "sort of”, "kind of”, or "in a way” answers as a "yes”, and check it. If you can't give it a definitive "no,” or have to justify why it is a "no,” then it is a "yes!” Remember, rationalizing your Mary Sue will not make it not be any less of one. A Mary Sue in denial is far more painful than a Mary Sue who knows what he/she is and deals with it accordingly.

Section 1: All about me! Or the character, anyway.

Fun with names! Is the Original Character (OC) in question: [Check all that apply]
Named after you in any way? This includes but is not limited to using one's first name, middle name, weird mutation of your real life name, screen name, chat name, etc.
If the OC is not named after you, is it the name of someone you know in real life, or a celebrity or individual that you look up to?
Is the name dramatic or unusual in the context of the universe? For instance, is it a human from Earth with a strange drule name, or is it a drule named Joe Smith?
Did you take a long time thinking up this name so it would be just right?
None of the above apply to my OC

Does it have your real life first name? (Check this even if you already checked the prior similar question)
Would you give a child or pet this name?
Does the name bear more than a passing resemblance to an existing canon character?
None of the above apply to my OC

Is it a total self-insertion?
Does this character's name get used in the title of your story, or in a long story, is the name featured in chapter titles?
None of the above apply to my OC

More about the character. Is this OC: [Check all that apply]
Central to the role of other OC's in the story? For instance, can you not introduce Character X until the OC is written in because Character X is OC's sibling/child/parent/lover/ex-lover and doesn't know any of the canon characters?
Are you, the author, and the OC the same gender?
Extraordinarily good looking, adorable, and/or imposing? (if you manage to incorporate all 3, I want to see a picture of this character.)
None of the above apply to my OC

If so, is the OC so good-looking that it's a plot point?
A human?
From Earth?
And also a space explorer?
None of the above apply to my OC

Or a drule perhaps?
A half-breed of some kind?
That just happens to be a human/drule mix?
None of the above apply to my OC

A teenager or in his/her early 20s?
Older than that but magically looking that age, or immortal?
About your age? (And no justifying this with, "well I'm 21 and OC is only 18 so no.” If you're within a few years, it counts.)
None of the above apply to my OC

Blessed with unusually colored or hypnotic eyes?
Unusual-looking for his/her race in another way, such as having an odd hair or skin color, or tattoo?
A member of the same professional field (doctor, scientist, pilot, etc.) that you are or wish to enter someday?
None of the above apply to my OC

Someone who speaks in an exotic or unusual accent?
From the same religious/cultural background as you are?
Into the same hobbies and interests that you are?
None of the above apply to my OC

Section 2: The traumatic past, or all that stuff OC was doing during the prior events of the show.

Is, was, or does the OC in question: [Check all that apply]
Raised by someone other than his/her natural parents? (Being sent off to boarding school or hidden away on another planet counts.)
Have a traumatizing past such as being abused (mentally, physically, or sexually), orphaned, enslaved, tortured, etc.?
Was it a canon character that inflicted these abuses upon them?
Was it rape or incest?
None of the above apply to my OC

A blood relation to a canon character?
Is it related to any of the male Voltron force members?
Or Allura/Alfor/Romelle/Bandor or Zarkon/Lotor?
The new heir apparent for either of those royal lines, displacing the canon current?
None of the above apply to my OC

And did not know this until the time of the story?
Royalty of another planet or house?
And does not know this?
A mentor, teacher, or caretaker of a canon character?
None of the above apply to my OC

For Princess Allura, Princess Romelle, Prince Bandor, or Prince Lotor?
The last survivor of some catastrophe on his/her planet?
That also happens to be the rightful ruler of or future leader of said planet?
None of the above apply to my OC

Suffer agonizing guilt over something that happened in his/her past?
Is it over something that was not his/her fault?
Is it enough of a plot point that other characters make a special effort to convince him/her of that fact?
But they still can't?
None of the above apply to my OC

Banished from his/her home world or family?
And the OC did not deserve it?
Have conflicting loyalties, such as being Zarkon's child but a member of the Galaxy Alliance?
Have a condition or disorder that you also possess or someone you are close to in real life does?
None of the above apply to my OC

Born in unusual circumstances?
That involve his/her presence in the Castle of Lions or Castle Doom?
First appear in the story in either of the two royal houses? (and yes, you still have to check this one even if you said yes to the questions above and that just happened to be the first appearance)
None of the above apply to my OC

Have a twin?
That's identical?
Who just happens to be the opposite alignment of the character?
None of the above apply to my OC

Section 3: Yahoo! Special powers, talents, and abilities!

Is, was, or does the OC in question: [Check all that apply]
Someone with a quality that a canon character has, but to a superior degree? For instance, stronger than Hunk, wittier than Lance, more compassionate or beautiful than Allura, more handsome than Keith, or a better swordsman than Lotor?
A witch, wizard, mage or possessor of other magical abilities?
Equal to or more powerful than Haggar's?
Does he/she not know that he/she has this power when the story begins and finds out later?
None of the above apply to my OC

Psychic, empathic, clairvoyant, or have any other telepathic mental abilities?
Equal to or stronger than Merla's?
And can also resist Merla's hypnotic suggestions?
Does he/she not know that he/she has this power when the story begins and finds out later?
None of the above apply to my OC

A font of knowledge about almost everything with no real qualifications for being such? For instance, a character that can fix the lions or treat wounds but is not an electrician or a medic?
Someone that can heal wounds at a thought or a touch?
Someone that all animals, even aggressive ones, seem comfortable around (if good) or are incredibly intimidated by (if evil)?
Someone with extraordinary stamina? For example, a human with incredible tolerance to pain or heat?
None of the above apply to my OC

Talented at one of the arts such as music, painting, acting, or the like?
Multi-talented, possessing skill in more than one of the above arts?
An exceptionally good pilot or one that learns amazingly quickly?
None of the above apply to my OC

Section 4: Plot Points

Does the OC: [Check all that apply]
Get to be the "star” of the story, meaning that he/she is the main focus of it?
Get introduced on the first page of a short story or first chapter of a long one? )
And start out in the "real world” only to arrive in the Voltron universe through a magic portal or time-shift?
None of the above apply to my OC

And he/she comes from the same state/region as you do? (
Join up with the team of their alignment pretty quickly after an initial meeting?
Catch the eye of any of the canon characters to the point where they hit on him/her?
And it makes another canon character jealous?
None of the above apply to my OC

Is the jealous party Lotor, Merla, Keith, Allura, Sven, or Romelle?
Wound up being liked or at least accepted by everyone in the character's chosen alignment? For example, everyone on the Voltron Force pretty much likes the OC, or in the case of an evil OC, everyone in Castle Doom puts up with his/her presence willingly?
Fall in love with and/or have sex (written out or implied) with Princess Allura, Keith, Lance, Sven, Princess Romelle, Prince Lotor, or Queen Merla?
Was it your character's first time?
None of the above apply to my OC

Was it the canon character's first time?
Fall in love with and/or have sex (written out or implied) with any other named canon character?
With a robeast? (if it's a tentacle robeast self-insertion lemon then paste a warning label on that fic.)
Marry a canon character?
None of the above apply to my OC

Is it the main plot of the story or pivotal point in a longer series?
And most of the main characters of their alignment attend?
Live permanently at the Castle of Lions?
None of the above apply to my OC

And become an official member of the Voltron Force with a lion of his/her own because they have replaced one of the canon lion pilots?
Or get a whole new lion that creates a new limb/feature/special weapon on Voltron?
None of the above apply to my OC

Is there a ceremony for this written out in the story?
Have or obtain a special weapon or his/her own ship that has unique abilities and powers that isn't a Voltron Lion?
But it can merge with Voltron or a robeast and make it significantly more powerful?
Befriend or take a liking to someone on the opposite alignment?
None of the above apply to my OC

Is the individual on the opposite alignment Princess Allura, Prince Lotor, Keith, Lance, Queen Merla, or Princess Romelle?
Does this friendship cause the canon character to switch sides?
If it does not, or the change is not permanent, is the canon character still permanently changed or affected by the experience with your OC?
None of the above apply to my OC

Save the day or a canon character's life?
Does he/she nearly die in the effort of doing so?
Does he/she actually die?
None of the above apply to my OC

Is everyone on their team deeply saddened by their loss and sacrifice?
But is he/she magically resurrected?
And last but not least, does a canon character make a serious sacrifice to bring your OC back?
None of the above apply to my OC

Section 5: All about me again! The author's angle.

Do or would you: [Check all that apply]
Befriend your OC in real life?
Become romantically involved with this character if he/she were real, or wish for him/her to be a part of your family?
Feel that the readers of your story should like your OC?
If they don't, do you take it personally?
None of the above apply to my OC

Roleplay frequently as this character?
Wish you were more like your OC?
Do you wish you were your OC?
Feature this character prominently in your drawings or artwork, or commission artists to draw him/her for you more than once?
None of the above apply to my OC

Make or commission someone else to make a custom action figure of your character?
Write sequels to your initial story featuring this character and his/her future exploits?
And the OC is the main focus of those as well?
specially since you're bringing him/her back from the dead in your sequel?
None of the above apply to my OC

Write a story bringing the canon characters and your OC into your "real” world?
And they meet you?
And they get stuck there permanently, or decide not to go back?
None of the above apply to my OC




Special thanks to Cheezey for writing this litmus test and letting me use her swell captures on the results pages ^.^







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